Chapter 2 yay!!!!:)
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Edward's POV:
Today was the best day so far... It could never be ruined. The Volturi were gone. They were so gone. They were never going to return. They were gone for good. I really couldnt think of why they had given up so easily. It really racked up my head with questions. But, it didnt matter anymore. We were together- Forever. Never to be separated. Bella, Renesmee, and I Had forever together. We had all the time in the world. We all loved each other. "Nessie, are you done hunting?" I asked her. "Yes, Im ready daddy," she replied. "You know we all love you," I glanced at Jacob and then back to Renesmee. "Yes, I know." Then she ran off. She was really fast nowadays. I couldnt believe she was growing so happy and healthy. I loved her so much.
Jacob's POV:
"Jacob," Edward said in a demanding voice. "Fine." I said. I ran so fast that I turned into my wolf form. It didnt take long for me to catch up to Nessie. I carefully swung her up on my back and kept her there for a while. I took her into the forest around dark. We told stories and ate smores and just had a good time. Nessie yawned. "Nessie, you should get some sleep," I told her. "Yeah. I probably should," she said. I shuffled over to her and put my arm around her. Tonight was perfect.
Renesmee's POV:
When I woke up, Jake was still snoring. I didnt want to wake him up, but we were in the middle of the forest and I didnt want to leave him there. So, I woke him up. We ran back to the house where, of course, Mom and Dad were waiting for me. They were worried, but as soon as I touched their faces, they were knowledged. "Jake, can we talk for a minute?" Mom asked him. "Sure," he said. And then mom made me leave the room wondering about what was wrong.
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Edward's POV:
Today was the best day so far... It could never be ruined. The Volturi were gone. They were so gone. They were never going to return. They were gone for good. I really couldnt think of why they had given up so easily. It really racked up my head with questions. But, it didnt matter anymore. We were together- Forever. Never to be separated. Bella, Renesmee, and I Had forever together. We had all the time in the world. We all loved each other. "Nessie, are you done hunting?" I asked her. "Yes, Im ready daddy," she replied. "You know we all love you," I glanced at Jacob and then back to Renesmee. "Yes, I know." Then she ran off. She was really fast nowadays. I couldnt believe she was growing so happy and healthy. I loved her so much.
Jacob's POV:
"Jacob," Edward said in a demanding voice. "Fine." I said. I ran so fast that I turned into my wolf form. It didnt take long for me to catch up to Nessie. I carefully swung her up on my back and kept her there for a while. I took her into the forest around dark. We told stories and ate smores and just had a good time. Nessie yawned. "Nessie, you should get some sleep," I told her. "Yeah. I probably should," she said. I shuffled over to her and put my arm around her. Tonight was perfect.
Renesmee's POV:
When I woke up, Jake was still snoring. I didnt want to wake him up, but we were in the middle of the forest and I didnt want to leave him there. So, I woke him up. We ran back to the house where, of course, Mom and Dad were waiting for me. They were worried, but as soon as I touched their faces, they were knowledged. "Jake, can we talk for a minute?" Mom asked him. "Sure," he said. And then mom made me leave the room wondering about what was wrong.
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Thanks for reading!:)
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Bella swan was a shy girl,
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine